Tuesday, 8 December 2020

Sina and the Eel dispirited writing

 We are Learning To: describe people, places and things

Remember to:

Use vivid adjectives

Use similes, metaphors and hyperboles (exaggerated statements) 

Use emotive language (words and phrases that make the reader feel strongly)


Sina was the most beautiful girl in the entire village. Her eyes were coloured like coffee with milk. Her smile was as beautiful as a spirit. Her hear flapped in the wind. She was as exquisite.

Hope you enjoy my writing Blog Ya Later

1 comment:

  1. Hi my name is Kaito from Room 24. I really like your blog post because it talks about what you are doing in that writing and tips to write your own. I have a question for you: what does dispirited mean?
    Bye blog ya later! Kaito

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