You've used some great descriptive language examples here Felix, it really helps me picture a volcano erupting in my mind! Just a suggestion for your first slide. Having the black font on the dark background makes it quite hard to read, perhaps next time you could use a different colour or shade the the background.
Kia ora Felix. Thanks for sharing your creative writing of a volcano exploding. You have started using some interesting vocab to create interest and hook in the reader. Some of the words are hard to read so you will need to go in and highlight behind them. Don't forget to write a purple paragraph to support your post.
You've used some great descriptive language examples here Felix, it really helps me picture a volcano erupting in my mind!
ReplyDeleteJust a suggestion for your first slide. Having the black font on the dark background makes it quite hard to read, perhaps next time you could use a different colour or shade the the background.
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Kia ora Felix. Thanks for sharing your creative writing of a volcano exploding. You have started using some interesting vocab to create interest and hook in the reader. Some of the words are hard to read so you will need to go in and highlight behind them. Don't forget to write a purple paragraph to support your post.
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