Kia ora Felix, I like what you have made here probably because I made it with you. That trick at the end got me for like 30 minutes. Blog ya Later Isaac.
Kia Ora Isaac, I know the chances of you actually reading this a reeealy low but here it goes. Thanks for commenting on your post it made me laugh seeing that the trick that we pulled on you worked it is sadly gone, maybe because one of the admins deleted it. Have a great Holiday blog ya later
Kia ora Felix. Great work working collaboratively with the others and getting your work up on your blog quickly. We may just have to have another look at your word choices in the haiku's though as some of them don't follow the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Some good word choice to get a lot of meaning across in only a few words. You boys do need to screencastify or mote your poems now!
Kia Ora Miss O'shea Felix here, Thanks for commenting on my blog. You didn't ask a question so i will take this opportunity to ask you one. Did you learn anything from our presentation? If you did i'm happy. Thanks again for commenting. Blog Ya Later
Kia ora Felix, Isaac & Leo - this work is a great example of Learn, Create, Share - tino pai! There are some great word choices throughout the different poems which tell me you have learnt a lot about volcanoes. The syllable count for haiku can be tricky. You can check how many syllables are in a word by going to: https://syllablecounter.net/ I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia Ora Felix,
ReplyDeleteI have just seen your collaborative work on Leo's blog, well done! I really enjoyed reading all of your haiku poems.
Kia ora Felix, I like what you have made here probably because I made it with you. That trick at the end got me for like 30 minutes. Blog ya Later Isaac.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Isaac, I know the chances of you actually reading this a reeealy low but here it goes. Thanks for commenting on your post it made me laugh seeing that the trick that we pulled on you worked it is sadly gone, maybe because one of the admins deleted it. Have a great Holiday blog ya later
DeleteNice job, Felix, I just saw this on Isaac's blog, good collaborating boys.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Felix. Great work working collaboratively with the others and getting your work up on your blog quickly. We may just have to have another look at your word choices in the haiku's though as some of them don't follow the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Some good word choice to get a lot of meaning across in only a few words. You boys do need to screencastify or mote your poems now!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Miss O'shea Felix here, Thanks for commenting on my blog. You didn't ask a question so i will take this opportunity to ask you one. Did you learn anything from our presentation? If you did i'm happy. Thanks again for commenting. Blog Ya Later
DeleteKia ora Felix, Isaac & Leo - this work is a great example of Learn, Create, Share - tino pai! There are some great word choices throughout the different poems which tell me you have learnt a lot about volcanoes.
ReplyDeleteThe syllable count for haiku can be tricky. You can check how many syllables are in a word by going to: https://syllablecounter.net/
I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)